Math?

by Lord Anzius

Published September 17, 2008

In Different poems

Math?

I'd rather take a bath,
But the numbers,
are as important as slumber.
Because,
if you don't know what is 1+2,
I'm sorry my friend but your very, very screwed.
But sometimes I even see people crying,
so trust me sometimes math feels like slow dying.

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lordgluzman
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lordgluzman commented Comment · Oct 3, 2008

I couldnt stop laughing.
It was funny.
Awsome job!!!!!!!!!!

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Fellow
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Fellow commented Comment · Sep 18, 2008

... Ok... Its more funny then my Breakdown, i must admit. *giggle* :)

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Lord Anzius
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Lord Anzius commented Comment · Sep 18, 2008

thanks :D

Livinginfantasy wrote a review Review · Sep 17, 2008

Lord Anzius wrote:Math?

I'd rather take a bath,

But the numbers,

are as important as slumber.

Because,

If you don't know what is 1+2,

I'm sorry but your very, very screwed.

But sometimes I even see people crying,

So trust me sometimes math feels like slow dying.


Hehe! I liked this... very cute! But I suggest changing the second line; it seems forced to me.

My favorite part was the third and fourth lines. How true!
Good job!

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Maki-Chan
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Maki-Chan wrote a review Review · Sep 17, 2008

YES! THis is exsactly how I feel about MATH! Its important but I HATE IT SO MUCH!!!!! >_<

Nice word use, and comparing math to such things as a slow and painful death.

So trust me sometimes math feels like slow dying.



My favorite part.



'Hush, hush!' I whispered; 'people can have many cousins and of all sorts, Miss Cathy, without being any the worse for it; only they needn't keep their company, if they be disagreeable and bad.
— Emily Bronte, Wuthering Heights